J.S.M - Heaven made me knowing you
I just finished my new song. I'm looking forward to your honest feedback. Don't let the video irritate you, it's unprofessional but I wanted to try something different instead of just showing the cover art the whole song.
I was inspired by the Kiss album "Unmasked" to write a song like that with actually a few melodies here and there in the bass guitar.
The production is very unprofessional again as I do not have a lot of equipment.
"My lady turned 22 today
She was a little naive and a little complicated
I used to look her way
Well she was talking too much but she's well decorated"
Let's make love not hate
And serve your best on a silver plate
Let's make love not war
That's not what we're here for
It takes more than a million hearts
So shout it out, just shout it out
It takes more than a brand new start
To shout it out what it's all about
Oh this world might be unfair through and through
But I know heaven made me knowing you
Why should a guy being different
Be left outside alone though he is tender hearted
I guess you were never on your own
The world is calling your name, forsakenly rewarded
Waiting on the corner then she's knocking on my door
There ain't this world no more
All I ever needed was your guiding light and love
That was enough
(:ROCK ON:) Enjoyed Da Listen.
Larry G. Killam
Larry G. Killam
I think the production sounds very professional. But I don't know anything about production, just know it sounds good to me.
Very good lyrics. Good music. Good song, very good.
And I like the video.
Great stuff, JSM! Quality song - music, lyrics, performance, production. You did a great job on the vocals and the video wasn't irritating at all 🙂
I may or may not be an enigma
Thank you for listening:)
Very happy, that nobody said, the video is cringy, yet ?