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17/03/2019 1:37 pm
Given that today I am in a moment of creative drought, I take the opportunity to share this song in the forum to rescue it. It is in Spanish and speaks of the fear of memories. I really like the lyrics, they born from a moment, from a memory precisely, and they came to my hand as soon as I took the pencil to write.
Here I leave the translation.
Fear
At nightfall
fear comes
and all the lights
seem few
to cover its shadows
its shadows
At nightfall
memories come
and any sound
seems little
to cover their mouths
their mouths
Fear
memories
they all dance together
in a strange place
that has no walls
Fear
memories
who shake hands
to torment me
in my today without heaven
in my today without heaven
The bad part of the doubt is that it has no face
17/03/2019 4:46 pm
Hello Mora and Marcus. Love the guitar work, Marcus. You have a wonderful tone and energy. Mora, your lyrics are beautiful. I particularly like
Fear
memories
they all dance together
in a strange place
that has no walls
One very small suggestion. In your translation, the word "small" would read better than the word "little" in your second verse because it matches the other long vowel sounds in the verse. Really a very small suggestion. ?
Jen
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17/03/2019 4:56 pm
Hey Mora,
Cool tune! Love the guitar work and the sultry vocals.
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17/03/2019 5:48 pm
Hello Mora and Marcus. Love the guitar work, Marcus. You have a wonderful tone and energy. Mora, your lyrics are beautiful. I particularly like
Fear
memories
they all dance together
in a strange place
that has no wallsOne very small suggestion. In your translation, the word "small" would read better than the word "little" in your second verse because it matches the other long vowel sounds in the verse. Really a very small suggestion. ?
Jen
I will try, thank you!!
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17/03/2019 5:49 pm
Thank you John!
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18/03/2019 8:15 pm
Hello Mora,
Great to see you again, beautiful song, intriguing video, and great guitar work, kudos and Thank you for sharing. Good luck and best wishes,
Speak soon
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19/03/2019 10:50 am
Wow!!! Thank you Gavin!! ?
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19/03/2019 10:50 am
Hi @Deacon
Thank you for your time and so nice words.
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