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24/11/2019 2:14 pm
When I made this song I was immersed in a night of the past, climbing on the top of a well, looking at the sky and discovering something I had never seen... I hope the lyrics will make you see what I saw and felt. See you!!!
(I know it is not a typical song, it is just a poem.)
I discovered
Universe
one night
lost
in my yesterday
when
I was lying
on the top of a well
on the top of a well
All the things
were stars
giving depth
to the sky
Everything was true
everything was a lie
under
that shining dark
under
that shining dark
I walked
on the lost stones
that
night
lost
in my yesterday
through the mirror
that lived in the fog
through the mirror
that lived in the fog
And I talked to the ghosts
of those that I loved
I danced with the shadows
of time that swims in peace
through the water
through the water
of my tears x2
This topic was modified 5 years ago by moraamarolaloba
The bad part of the doubt is that it has no face
24/11/2019 5:31 pm
This is great, Mora. A real multi-media experience. Marcus' music is fantastic here. I took from it the immensity of the universe and its unknowable quality. The usual poetic images in the lyrics.
If you are able to go back and update the vocal track a bit, I would correct your pronunciation of "discovered" and maybe be careful about how you say "under." It sound like "udder," which is something quite different 🙂 Really minor things. I enjoyed the experience very much. Thank you for sharing.
I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com
Topic starter
27/11/2019 6:30 am
Hola @Gavin
Thank you very much for listening and commenting.
Hmmm I want to tell you that it's not easy to me to connect with the forum, there are a lot of times it's impossible!!! Today I reached it!!!
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The bad part of the doubt is that it has no face
Topic starter
27/11/2019 11:58 am
Of course Gavin! Many times trying to accede the Forum it appears as "Page not found"
The bad part of the doubt is that it has no face
28/11/2019 12:11 pm
I used to have that problem until I saved the link in my favorites. It took forever for Google to recognize this site even exists.
https://www.soundclick.com/artist/default.cfm?bandid=1449856
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04/12/2019 1:06 pm
Thank you @JAPOV
I tried with your system but... nothing changes... Today I reached!!!
The bad part of the doubt is that it has no face
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