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21/03/2019 7:48 pm
OK so this one is a little dark. The song isn't released yet but it will be on our upcoming album.
SOUL TO KEEP
INTRO
Now I lay me down to sleep
I pray the Lord my soul to keep
Guide me through the starry night
And wake me with the morning light
VERSE 1:
Night falls. I go to sleep.
Dreams come but I get no peace
Black thoughts that mess with my brain
Day plays on a loop in vain
Lessons learned so close to none
That innocence is all but gone
Poor choices and regrets
Let me out!
I want to wake up!
CHORUS:
Save me!
These hands are unclean
Save me!
This soul worth keeping
VERSE 2:
Dark dreams reflect a dark day
Haunting visions of man's decay
Told the torment would come to an end
When we choose the Word and repent
Nothing ventured; nothing gained
Walk the path or accept our fate
Chained to the shadow Eden's greed
The world's a prison and there's only one key (to)
CHORUS
Save me!
These hands are unclean
Save me!
CHORUS
Save me!
These hands are unclean
Save me!
This soul worth keeping
Save me!
I'm ransomed. Redeemed.
Save me!
This soul worth keeping
This topic was modified 6 years ago by John Evans
21/03/2019 8:42 pm
Hello John,
Not really so dark at all, chorus is good. One might say this is a "Metal/Gospel song". Good luck and best wishes,
Speak soon
Music is an international language, say it with a song. deaconmusic4u@gmail.com
21/03/2019 10:07 pm
Good stuff!
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21/03/2019 10:55 pm
Thank you everyone!
Gav - Yeah Jenny just threw her hair over face and I put on the clown makeup and we hit 'record'.
22/03/2019 3:43 pm
This for me is a diabolic music.
I always liked this kind of music very much
Because within them there is always a kind of fantasy that is always appreciated by people who value the imagination in the works
The video is also very good, because it has that hard point that causes respect and fear.
Very good work
Topic starter
24/03/2019 12:20 am
Thanks Marcus!
24/03/2019 9:18 am
I like very much dark music, I consider myself a dark woman, but I don't reach it totally hahaha!!!
Good song, good lyrics. As Gavin said, you look fine both! hahaha
great video.
The bad part of the doubt is that it has no face
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24/03/2019 6:57 pm
Thank you Mora!
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