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JAPOV
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Good'ol boy named Mac sent me a lyric and I took some liberties  😎 

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We got'a hot bright night and a big ol' lover’s moon
And this old dirt road really gets our hearts in tune
We got'a radio rockin’ Buddy Holly with the rag-top down
'Cause love’s all we got... In a small town

Where the blacktop ends you can kiss the blues goodbye
B, B, B, Baby, baby, baby you know our love is right
The first time we felt this way
We knew love was here to stay
Baby rockabilly love is here to stay

Girl the last time — We loved all night
You had me going — ’Til broad daylight
Both hada smile — On our face
Gotta' have love before the night gets way, hey
Baby rockabilly love is here to stay

Yeah' we're holdin’ on tight as we drive into the night
My baby's sweet kissin' makes me wanna' fly
Her naughty smile and those playful eyes
Lovin’ kissin' touchin' pleasin' still gets me high

 

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Gavin
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Sounds great, Tony!

The hook feels a little buried at the end of the chorus, even though you do repeat the line. How about changing, "Cause love’s all we got... In a small town" to "Rockabilly love’s all we got... In a small town." It would introduce it earlier in the song. I think it would fit the music.

Also, I'm not crazy about the line "B, B, B, Baby, baby, baby you know our love is right." "Our love is right" feels kind of blah. How about, " B, B, B, Baby, baby, baby you know our love can fly?" Or something like that.

How about some background "Oohs" on the chorus?

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JAPOV
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Well, you know I never could have written this to begin with lol...

Ooohhs n Aaahhs are a great idea, I'll take volunteers! 🤗 

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YrralMallik
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I love Da Beat right from the get go.Enjoyed Da Listen my friend.

Larry G. Killam


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JAPOV
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Thanks Larry!

Check the "Whats Happening" thread for a collab opportunity 🙂

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YrralMallik
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Your welcome my friend.

 

Larry G. Killam


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