The lyrics are sort of old, and possibly too abstract to make any real sense, in all honesty, but I recorded this tonight and I like it, so I figured I’d share. Any feedback’s appreciated. Cheers
https://m.soundcloud.com/rhys-rj-fraser/sets/on-a-song-that-i-wrote
Hey Rhys. It took me a while to realize that I'd heard this one before. You really changed it. It's a totally new tune sung this way. It seemed to me like it took a while for you to get into the groove of the tune (vocally that is). From about 44 seconds your performance takes a big jump over the first verse. That chorus is done really well. Love the guitar intro Rhys.
https://soundcloud.com/jennystokes-nz
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Hey Jenny! Thanks, and sorry for taking so long to reply. Glad ya liked it, and I agree about the verse. I re-recorded the vocals, hopefully it’s better!
https://m.soundcloud.com/rhys-rj-fraser/sets/on-a-song-that-i-wrote
