Hi Willy. Love, love LOVE your guitar playing. Such a nice tone you're getting. Nice catchy pre-chorus and chorus too. I didn't hear all the verse lyrics though. It's always helpful for folks if you post your lyrics with your video so if we miss them while listening we've got something to check in with.

Thanks for sharing your song.

Jen 

Posted by: @jenny-stokes

Hi Willy. Love, love LOVE your guitar playing. Such a nice tone you're getting. Nice catchy pre-chorus and chorus too. I didn't hear all the verse lyrics though. It's always helpful for folks if you post your lyrics with your video so if we miss them while listening we've got something to check in with.

Thanks for sharing your song.

Jen 

Hi Jenny, 

Love your feedback too, hahah... The lyrics as below, hope you'd like it.

Verse1:

The sky has dropped this honorable rain on my face, been trying real hard to remind me of my sins

So I'd fall from the pedestal and back to where I came from, on please, leave me alone

Now this may be rough when the vulnerable me's to be seen, it's been a long while since the first time I encouraged myself

Got nothing left to wait for changing what goes on, it is a wake-up call

Pre-chorus:

I'mma get rid of the inner fears, look up the sky above that had me drenched through its

Chorus:

Falling rain (X5), come let it all rain on me

I'm the man who can build up a faith over and over again, I'll break the mold, falling rain goes anywhere I follow

Verse2:

Only me who can feel this thunderous chaos in my head, it's gonna leave scars to mark my determination 

So I'm done being insecure and then you'll see me blunt, indeed, get freshened up

Now running on the way with treacherous setups laid ahead, it may seen a bit odd but don't need no elaboration

Got everything that I long for, what'd help me step forward, it is a wake-up call

Agree with Jen. Luv the guitar playing. Good song.

@ckiphen Thx pal, appreciate your comment!!!