I like the groove you have going through the song. Musically, I think it's good, especially the chorus. and will sound even better with a polished recording.
I'm less of a fan of the lyric. In places it seems a bit like like random phrases thrown together. That might not matter so much in this type of song where maybe the actual meaning of the lyric is subordinate to the music and the hook. So then it's a question of whether the hook is strong enough. The melody of the chorus stuck with me after I'd finished listening, so that's good. If I were you, I'd go back and see if I could write more to the hook. Nothing elsewhere in the song relates to the idea of the city light. Maybe, you could start by having the singer and his love interest walking through the city at night.
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