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WillyKuoMusic
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Free feel to check on this track and leave some comments!

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Lyrics:

Verse1: 
I feel this going well, and it's not a metaphor, this loving sensation heals my very soul Ain't gonna rush into vows, baby we'll take it slow, but you'd know we're more than friends Come with me, let's make a deal, no lies, you have my word, I couldn't hide my emotions cuz they getting real Bad memories are gone when I sing you my song, that tonight I won't lose the chance
 
Pre-chrous: If it's meant to be we'd fall for this love we shared, then it can't be wrong
 
Chorus: You got me feeling like, we own the city light, can't figure why, how you touch me so nice You got me feeling like, we own the city light, I think it's time, let's get it on tonight, tonight, let's get it on, let's get it on, yeah we own the city light (x2)
 
Verse2:
Love me with the heart of yours, don't let me go implore, the only thing in this whole world I could never fail Take a look at yourself, crazy beautiful, you may now just take my hand C'mon baby, just to name a few, it's alright I can afford, everything you want I'll make it possible Here comes the number one music renaissance, that tonight I won't lose the chance

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Gavin
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I like the groove you have going through the song. Musically, I think it's good, especially the chorus. and will sound even better with a polished recording.

I'm less of a fan of the lyric. In places it seems a bit like like random phrases thrown together. That might not matter so much in this type of song where maybe the actual meaning of the lyric is subordinate to the music and the hook. So then it's a question of whether the hook is strong enough. The melody of the chorus stuck with me after I'd finished listening, so that's good. If I were you, I'd go back and see if I could write more to the hook. Nothing elsewhere in the song relates to the idea of the city light. Maybe, you could start by having the singer and his love interest walking through the city at night.

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WillyKuoMusic
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@gavin Thanks man, I'll keep up the good work hahah!

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