Well that was a surprise. What a neat song. I love the turn it takes at the chorus. It's like the chorus is a different song but still fits regardless. Thank you for sharing that Nelly.

Jen

I loved the song and the performance. Not as big a fan as Jen of the unrelated feel of the verse and chorus, and for me the ending took too long, but I still really enjoyed it.

I love rule breaking so that might be why I liked the contrast. I see what you mean about the ending, Gavin. It's almost like it was written for a musical with that drawn out ending giving space for some dramatic scene closer to happen. It's a pretty original presentation. I don't recall ever seeing a song unfold in that way.

Gav..... you can be such a POOP! That song is awesome, the storyline and mood of the music are perfect! Priscilla is a great example of what you can do if you can really SING!!! ? 

Hey, I said I loved the song and the performance! Totally agree. Not with the POOP bit, but with everything else you say. Well. maybe you have a point about the POOP too.

Aaaaa.... you're right Gav, I overreacted. Sorry man, POOP was a little harsh! ? 

Great Song  -   My Family Tree -  absolutely beautiful , And The contrast between 

Verse and Chorus is Perfect        All Great Chorus's  Stand out in that manner for me

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