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ckiphen
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Wonderful You

Verse

I had given up on finding love.

I’d told myself I’m thru.

Then god blessed me with a miracle.

It was wonderful you.

Pre chorus

Thought the skies must be jealous

To see eyes so blue.

I thought my god she’s beautiful.

Wonderful you.

Chorus

Wonderful you,

Wonderful you

Wonderful you.

Verse

I was planning on a lonely life.

I told my friend I’m done.

Out of the clouds you came shining in.

Like the morning sun.

Pre chorus

Thought the skies must be jealous

To see eyes so blue.

I thought my god she’s beautiful.

Wonderful you.

Chorus

Wonderful you,

Wonderful you

Wonderful you.

Bridge

Can’t count the ways you bring me joy.

Each and every day.

A smile, a laugh, your soft caress.

The sweet things that you say.

carroll kiphen


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Robbi
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Hi Carroll,
wow, these lines are so powerful. They hit me straight in the face. This is the way I would package them musically. Hope you like it.

All the best
Robert

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ckiphen
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Thanks Rob. Great work. Captured thesentiment perfectly.

 

carroll kiphen


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YrralMallik
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Enjoyed Da Read.

Larry G. Killam


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