Notifications
Clear all

The love you should have had


ckiphen
(@ckiphen)
Noble Member
Joined: 3 years ago
Posts: 1388
Topic starter  

The love you should have had

Intro T

Sometimes love walks out of the past

And back into your life

Gives back what you should have had.

Verse

 I saw her in the grocery store.

I noticed she liked white wine.

She asked where the vine ripe tomatoes were.

I said next to the fresh thyme.

Pre chorus

She smiled and asked do I know you

So I said to her

Chorus

I’m the kiss you missed on prom night.

The dance you never had.

I’m the walk out in the moonlight.

The love you should have had.

Verse

I asked is tonight spaghetti night

 Suggested a nice red wine.

She said you seem the romantic type.

I said yes from time to time.

Pre chorus

She smiled and asked do I know you

So I said to her

Chorus

I’m the kiss you missed on prom night.

The dance you never had.

I’m the walk out in the moonlight.

The love you should have had.

Bridge

That night we shared our first kiss

Our chance to get it right.

A slow dance with no music.

A walk in the moonlight.

Tag/ outro

Sometimes love walks out of the past

And back into your life

Gives back what you should have had.

 

carroll kiphen


Quote
Gavin
(@gavin)
Prominent Member
Joined: 3 years ago
Posts: 959
 

I really like this, Carroll. It has a great wistfulness about it without being sad. One of your best, I think. I don't think it needs the intro and outro - a little too much explanation for my taste - but that's something that could be decided if and when it's put to music.

I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com


ReplyQuote
ckiphen
(@ckiphen)
Noble Member
Joined: 3 years ago
Posts: 1388
Topic starter  

Thanks not sure about the intro outro either.

carroll kiphen


ReplyQuote
Share: