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Topic starter
06/08/2021 3:41 pm
Never let me go
Verse
My heart has a lot of mileage.
It has some wear and tear.
It could be there’s too much damage
To ever be repaired.
Pre chorus
If you care, if you care.
We can give it a go.
Chorus
Hold me, hold me close.
Please tell me it’s so.
Tell me you love me.
Never let me go.
Verse
I’ve known my fair share of failures.
Times I’ve felt sad and blue.
And yet here you are still trying
To come to my rescue.
Pre chorus
If you care, if you care.
We can give it a go.
Chorus
Hold me, hold me close.
Please tell me it’s so.
Tell me you love me.
Never let me go.
Bridge
I promise when I’m up and running.
I’ll take you where you want to go.
carroll kiphen
11/08/2021 8:56 pm
Carroll . . . I like this one . . . I can picture it as an up-tempo blues song. I like how in your lyrics you manage to keep it simple, and the necessary pop music rhymes are all there, yet never overly obvious or predictable, well done.
Topic starter
11/08/2021 10:09 pm
Thank you. Use it if you like.
carroll kiphen
23/09/2021 12:06 pm
I fell in love with these lines and just recorded a quick & dirty draft. Any comments?
I used EZ Keys, EZ Bass and EZ Drummer on this one.
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14316001
All the best
Robert
Guy E. Trepanier liked
23/09/2021 3:44 pm
I like the version that Robbi did.
I also did a little tune: as usual, my voice + ukulele.
Click the attached file hereafter.
K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple and Singable
https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=588312
https://soundcloud.com/guyetrep : in English (my voice + ukulele)
https://soundcloud.com/guyechante : en Français (in french)
https://soundcloud.com/user-380042223 : songs with lyricists
https://www.reverbnation.com/control_room/artist/1969477/songs
24/09/2021 2:25 am
I find it amazing how people interpret the exact same lyric totally differently ? .
Take care
Robert
Guy E. Trepanier liked
Topic starter
24/09/2021 9:41 am
Yes very different takes. Love this aspect of writing songs.
carroll kiphen
Guy E. Trepanier liked
24/09/2021 11:20 am
@robbi I think this could be really good. You've really got EZ-Keys and EZ-Drummer working for you. Sounds great.
I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com
24/09/2021 3:47 pm
Thanks Gavin. Don't tell anybody that in reality I didn't play a single instrument. With the software I mentioned I wrote and recorded the complete playback in less than 30 minutes. EZ is really awesome. It's the ultimate tool for songwriters.
I just added some ear candy: harmony vocals as well as an e-guitar and an acoustic guitar that were generated by my Yamaha keyboard.
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14316001
All the best
Robert
www.robertbaitinger.de
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