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Unseen Wires


ckiphen
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Unseen Wires

Verse

Your phone has eyes and ears.

It’s employed by the man.

It works undercover.

Gives you silent commands.

Pre chorus

Dance my little marionette

Dance and sing their song.

Dance and sing their song.

Chorus

It implements their plan.

Listens to your conversations

Knows your every desire.

It controls you like a puppet.

It tugs on unseen wires.

Verse

Everyone’s addicted.

They got to have their phone.

Get withdrawals without it.

They can’t leave it at home.

Pre chorus

Dance my little marionette

Dance and sing their song.

Dance and sing their song.

Chorus

Listens to your conversations

Knows your every desire.

It controls you like a puppet.

It tugs on unseen wires.

Verse

Nothing goes unnoticed.

It listens and watches you.

You’re never alone friend.

It knows your every move.

Pre chorus

Dance my little marionette

Dance and sing their song.

Dance and sing their song.

Chorus

Listens to your conversations

Knows your every desire.

It controls you like a puppet.

It tugs on unseen wires.

Bridge

There ain’t no hiding away.

  • No space it can’t invade.

carroll kiphen


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Deacon
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Hello Carroll, Thank you for sharing, this is a good write.  I was a little thrown by the first verse being only three lines, ( and if not try "all according to plan" as the fourth line), and I assume you repeat the chorus after the bridge, otherwise I have to say kudos.  Good luck and best wishes,

Speak soon

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ckiphen
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I must have left a line out. Ill fix it tomorrow

carroll kiphen


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ckiphen
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Ok fixed it.

Gives you silent commands.

carroll kiphen


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