Wrote the first version of this early in 2017. Updated it a bit and put it to the instrumental ‘Waves’, which I posted in Tune Topics last week. I think it turned out pretty neat, but any feedback is of course appreciated. Cheers
https://soundcloud.com/user-804172376-210408674/so-ill-stand
This Empty Road’s My Home
I hadn’t joined some race
Where I was vying for the lead
Or keeping up some pace
To raise some funds for charity
There was no posse giving chase
No sheriff barking leave
No cheated barkeep screaming
About an ace tucked up my sleeve
But I still ran
Oh, I still ran
I had nowhere to go
So down the open road oh
I just ran
Oh I just ran
Two eyes to guide ten toes
On my two feet on where to go
And I just ran
I had nowhere to go
I had no place to be
No urgent three o’clock to keep
Nothing to see, no one to meet
Just empty road behind me hiding
Under overgrown willow trees
That kept the sun from frying all
The sand beneath my feet
And so I ran
Down the empty road alone
Oh, I just ran
I let my eyes guide my toes and I just ran
Oh I just ran
Oh, I just ran
I had nowhere to go
So down the open road oh
I just ran
Oh I just ran
And I guess I took the long way home
But I don’t really know
Oh I just ran
Though I tried my best
I couldn’t fake belief
I wish I could be blind but close my eyes to sleep and all I see
Is apathy surrounding me
the tragic savage damage of the hatred all Society’s hypocrisy
monoton-rottin-hostile farce false idol-ous it starts to seem
lost home to me
where all sense and peace has ceased
It seems deceased at least I need some time to think
But even when I find the guts to scream
It’s like I don’t know how to breathe
So I know I can’t change a thing
I pinched myself it’s not a dream
And I can’t pretend to know the plan
If I’m at the start or that’s the end
But I’m not stepping back again
Because this is my home
This empty road
There’s nowhere else to go and so I’ll stand
And if the wind brings snow or sand
Until I can’t command my hands
Just know I’ll never run again
And if I’m buried understand
I wasn’t lonely at the end
This empty road’s my friend
And it’s the only home I know
And so I’ll stand
https://m.soundcloud.com/rhys-rj-fraser/sets/on-a-song-that-i-wrote
Hey Rhys. Nice arrangement. Of the lyrics, I reckon you could easily delete these ones without any negative effect. It would let your lovely arrangement stand on it's own.
And so I ran
Down the empty road alone
Oh, I just ran
I let my eyes guide my toes and I just ran
Cheers,
Jen
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