I have a recording of this if it would help. I tend to like old time music, older blues and bluegrass style things and this is similar to something from the time period.

Thanks for any input I appreciate it

@vet393

I'd like to hear the recording, Vet. I'll try to chime in with any suggestions that come to mind, although there are others here who are better qualified to comment on songs with a religious theme.

Here it is

https://www.reverbnation.com/johncarlmorris/song/32481485-man-beside-me-acoustic

Very atmospheric guitar and vocals. Has a real old time gospel feel to it. The chorus is basically the same as the verse melodically, which is in keeping with that style. It's very singable. The melody stays with you after you hear it, which is always a good thing. The lyric conveys a simple message. I don't think there is anything I would change, except maybe a slightly shorter instrumental break. I enjoyed listening to this.