Hello all! Here is my newest lyrics, I hope you'll like it! Every feedback is appreciated! ☺
Before y'all reading my lyrics, here's a fact I want you to know:
The other meaning of this expression is honor of sacrifice. In the USA, the military veterans are awarded with the Purple Heart medal (Military Medal) when they got injured while serving their country.
So, it’s a true honor sign. It is also about compassionate Love and understanding.
Purple Heart
(Verse1)
Momma raised me to be a good boy
"Never treat a women like a toy"
She always said "just know your place....
...And then you'll find your base"
I've always lived up to it
I treated you like a queen
Though you never seemed satisfied
Maybe that's why you kept chasing other guys
(Pre-Chorus)
I tried to be understanding
I tried to never mind it
(Chorus)
But we both know that ain't right
I gave you my purple heart
But you didn't take care of it
You broke it and stomped
So why would I come?
Just to make you feeling fine?
To boost your ego
So then you can tell me to go
(Post-Chorus)
Just to make you feeling fine?
When all you do is breaking my heart
Oh, my purple heart
We both know that ain't right
To break my purple heart
Oh, my purple heart
(Verse2)
I should've known I'm not the only one
At least I could say you pulled a gun
Then I'd have reason for staying with you
A reason for all the stupid things I do
I'm always fascinated by your smile
You make me do anythin' with your eyes
I would even die for 'em
Oh, the shape of your legs
(Pre-Chorus)
I tried to resist your temptation
I tried to calm the frustration
(Chorus)
But we both know that ain't right
I gave you my purple heart
But you didn't take care of it
You broke it and stomped
So why would I come?
Just to make you feeling fine?
To boost your ego
So then you can tell me to go
(Post-Chorus)
Just to make you feeling fine?
When all you do is breaking my heart
Oh, my purple heart
We both know that ain't right
To break my purple heart
Oh, my purple heart
(Bridge)
Every day I decide to leave you
But you got me turn around
Though I know you're gonna make a fool of me
I'm coming back every time
Every day I decide to leave you
But you got me turn around
Though I know you're gonna make a fool of me
I'm coming back every time
(Chorus)
Even though we both know that ain't right
I gave you my purple heart
But you didn't take care of it
You broke it and stomped
So why would I come?
Just to make you feeling fine?
To boost your ego
So then you can tell me to go
(Post-Chorus)
Just to make you feeling fine?
When all you do is breaking my heart
Oh, my purple heart
We both know that ain't right
To break my purple heart
Oh, my purple heart
Hello Bogi, This lyric has a title that automatically catches your audience interest. The first verse is interesting and sets the stage for the rest of the lyric, the pre chorus, the chorus, and the post chorus come across as being a little awkward, they may need a little rew0rking. May I offer a suggestion, keep it or sweep it;
Pre chorus
I tried to understand,
I tried to never mind.
Chorus
We both know it wasn't right,
I gave to you my purple heart.
You didn't care,
you broke it apart.
Why should I try,
to make you feel fine?
To boost your ego,
just to let me go.
It seems the post chorus is much the same as the chorus other than you hit your hook three times, possibly work "Oh my purple heart" into your chorus. I hope in some this helps. Good luck and best wishes,
Speak soon
Music is an international language, say it with a song. deaconmusic4u@gmail.com
Hi Deacon! Thank you for your suggestions! Maybe this is my craziness ? but I like this pre chorus so I just renamed it. ?
Purple Heart
(Verse1)
Momma raised me to be a good boy
"Never treat a women like a toy"
She always said "just know your place....
...And then you'll find your base"
I've always lived up to it
I treated you like a queen
Though you never seemed satisfied
Maybe that's why you kept chasing other guys
(Pre-Chorus)
I tried to understand
I tried to never mind
(Chorus)
But we both know it wasn't right
I gave you my purple heart
But you didn't care
You broke it apart
So why should I try
To make you feel fine?
To boost your ego
Just to let me go
(Hook)
Just to make you feel fine?
When all you do is break' my heart
Oh, my purple heart
We both know it wasn't right
To break my purple heart
Oh, my purple heart
(Verse2)
I should've known I'm not the only one
At least I could say you pulled a gun
Then I'd have reason for staying with you
A reason for all the stupid things I do
I'm always fascinated by your smile
You make me do anythin' with your eyes
I would even die for 'em
Oh, the shape of your legs
(Pre-Chorus)
I tried to resist your temptation
I tried to calm the frustration
(Chorus)
But we both know it wasn't right
I gave you my purple heart
But you didn't care
You broke it apart
So why should I try
To make you feel fine?
To boost your ego
Just to let me go
(Hook)
Just to make you feel fine?
When all you do is break' my heart
Oh, my purple heart
We both know it wasn't right
To break my purple heart
Oh, my purple heart
(Bridge)
Every day I decide to leave you
But you got me turn around
Though I know you're gonna make a fool of me
I'm coming back every time
Every day I decide to leave you
But you got me turn around
Though I know you're gonna make a fool of me
I'm coming back every time
(Chorus)
Even though we both know it wasn't right
I gave you my purple heart
But you didn't care
You broke it apart
So why should I try
To make you feel fine?
To boost your ego
Just to let me go
(Hook)
Just to make you feel fine?
When all you do is break' my heart
Oh, my purple heart
We both know it wasn't right
To break my purple heart
Oh, my purple heart
Hello Bogi, Some of your changes have helped this lyric. You can enhance the lyric by placing your hook "Purple heart" in strategic places such as the last line of a verse, first and/or last line of the chorus, as this helps your audience to recall the title and the focus of the lyric, "Purple heart". Do have music for this lyric? If not, try to find a local musician or band that can help you put music to this lyric, and refine the lyric to work with the music. Hope this helps, good luck and best wishes,
Speak soon
Music is an international language, say it with a song. deaconmusic4u@gmail.com
Hi Deacon! Thank you for your suggestions again! And yeah, I'm about to find someone who can help me with the music. xx
