Just finished this one. Spent much longer on mixing and sound editing than usual. Hopefully it turned out well! Any feedback's of course appreciated! Cheers
Don't know how to rush
But I can't slow down
Cuz I only got one speed
And that speed's go
And I'm only at my best
when I gotta be now
This high-stress mess
is my comfort zone
My high-stress messed up comfort zone
My high-stress messed up comfort zone
My high-stress messed up comfort zone
Oh, but you may wanna go
This thing may be about to blow
He said hey wait hold up why ain't ya shaking
Haven't even blinked when everybody's fainting
Speed your heart must be palpitating
All the caffeine and pills that you're taking
So I said b please breathe we're just playing
Sneaky wire scheme fake green
ground supply line seems right
hold tight see if I'm not mistaken
yup that wasn't it, yikes
Now the fuse timer's racing
Don't know how to rush
But I can't slow down
Cuz I only got one speed
And that speed's go
And I'm only at my best
when I gotta be now
Cuz a high-stress mess
is my comfort zone
Can't see sightless no fright fight I guess I'm making up a rhyme
No reason why
Pull a cord this one seems fine
I cut the line then frozen time
For lights to shine and to hear sirens blaze
Cameras flash outside check my hair's amazing shameless boredom, dexedrine, a calloused heart, a hero's made
I picked a part and played it
Just pick a part and play it
Cuz everybody's faking
Don't know how to rush
But I can't slow down
Cuz I only got one speed
And that speed's go
And I'm only at my best
when I gotta be now
Cuz a high-stress mess
is my comfort zone
This high-stress mess is my comfort zone
This high-stress mess is my comfort zone
This high-stress mess is my comfort zone
Cuz if this thing's about to blow
Not like we're ever gonna know
Wait, hold up, I'm kidding it's alright
don't drop the light
I see the fear in your eyes
but I think well be alright
got a bit uh time I think
we'll probably still make it
Hell, worst case a sky high vacation
Aaaaand fuck great buddy's running away
And now I'm talking to myself so I guess I'm insane
and I've got no light
just cuz the bomb may bite
Can't see sightless no fright fight I guess I'm making
Up a rhyme no reason why
Pull a cord this one seems fine
I cut the line then frozen time
And BAM DEFUSED I guess that's why when you don't know they say to just fake it
Then I light a smoke and wait just a wee bit
For lights to shine abc to hear sirens blaze
Cameras flash outside check my hair's amazing shameless boredom Dexedrine a calloused heart a hero's made picked a part and played it
https://m.soundcloud.com/rhys-rj-fraser/sets/on-a-song-that-i-wrote
Meh, I suppose I'm happy with either or. I tend to post my songs to the lyric library, simply because I like to post the lyrics to they're easier to critique, but don't really want to blow this place up with double posts on everything. Btw, I see you're new. Welcome!
https://m.soundcloud.com/rhys-rj-fraser/sets/on-a-song-that-i-wrote
You get weirder and weirder, Rhys 🙂 I like that about you, but I can't make out a word of this. Is that intentional? If so, it kind of makes writing the lyrics a waste of your time LOL.
I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com
Hey Gavin, thanks for the feedback and sorry for the late reply (been a hectic week). Tried to clean the mixing up a bit, not finding it too hard to make out (for the most part), but I've got biased ears. Hopefully it's better. Hope you're doing well! Cheers
https://m.soundcloud.com/rhys-rj-fraser/sets/on-a-song-that-i-wrote
Hello Rhys, Thank you for sharing, and this is classic Rhys. Never thought of this kind of subject matter for a song, but it is at the least mind blowing, lol. Took a couple of times listening and reading the lyric before I could wrap my mind around it, but I finally got it. Keep em coming my friend, I always enjoy what you put out there. Good luck and best wishes,
Speak soon
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Nope, still completely unintelligible unless you are reading along. It's a pity, because I really like the sound. If you were to ease back on the distortion so that the words could be made out and maybe use the choppy effect a little more sparingly, I think you'd really have something here. It's not that I don't like the choppy effects - they should definitely stay - just that there are places where it starts to take off musically only to be brought to a screeching halt 🙂
I really like the lyric.
I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com
https://m.soundcloud.com/rhys-rj-fraser/sets/on-a-song-that-i-wrote
Haha, thanks dude. I'll try a couple of things and let ya know once I've (hopefully) fixed it! Always appreciate the feedback, cheers
https://m.soundcloud.com/rhys-rj-fraser/sets/on-a-song-that-i-wrote
