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OK, Back to basics.... "EXCITED"


JAPOV
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SEX! Beautiful women make me wanna' rock! ? 

 

Heartbreak, earthquake, double take, heaven's sake...

Honey, why you look like that

Maintain, love pain, thrill game, insane...

You’ve been caught in the act 

(There’s your basic verse form, roll with it)

 

You know you got me excited, (no you can’t get away)

Baby you got me excited, (this one is ready to play)

Oh, you got me excited, Yea' you got me excited 

(play around in the parentheses... or whatever lol)

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ckiphen
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Tempting to go Frank Zappa on ya.

carroll kiphen


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ckiphen
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She got it under lock and key

Dont wanna share her love with me

Iron Malden.....

carroll kiphen


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JAPOV
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Lol, I can do Zappa!

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ckiphen
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Im stuck on this one. Want to help me finish it?

I had a dream about us.

I wanna make it come true.

Did all sort of kinky things.

____?

 

I'm an early morning riser

Wake straight up from my dream.

Im an early morning riser

If you know what i mean.

 

You want a cup of coffee

But I'm raring to go.

I'm standing at attention.

Wanna dance toe to toe.

( maybe a chorus with Morning Wood)???

carroll kiphen


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AllfortheLord
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moonshine, two timed,stay in line, don't you whine

I don't, need your permission

backslap, flytrap, beat the rap, full of crap

why don't you stop your bitchin 

 

 

 

You know you got me excited, (caution turns me on)

Baby you got me excited, (all the spots i never known)

Oh, you got me excited, Yea' you got me excited 

(play around in the parentheses... or whatever lol)


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Gavin
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@ckiphen

I had a dream about us.
I wanna make it come true.
Did all kind of kinky things.
You never knew I knew

or...

I had a dream about us.
I wanna make it come true.
I did all kind of kinky things.
And you did one or two..too...

I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com


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ckiphen
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I like the you never knew i knew.

carroll kiphen


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YrralMallik
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Heartbreak, earthquake, double take, heaven's sake...

Honey, why you look like that

Baby looks like your ready to bake a cake.

Larry G. Killam


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JAPOV
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Bake a cake... Lol. Perhaps I need a pre-chorus.... The verse is supposed to illustrate that mind-blowing revelation when a new love interest is reciprocated.... But that’s obviously not coming across lol

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AllfortheLord
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what I got was some guy maybe watchin a flix or some other chic bustin  a few hearts and has a male harem line a mile long trailing behind her, and his chick ain't measuring up to this other gal so he's telling her to powder up, get in shape or yall find yor man in that trailing line too

 


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