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Love Hangover


ckiphen
(@ckiphen)
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Intro

We were postcard perfect.

Wore matching clothes.

I had no idea

There were thorns on my rose.

Verse

Had no clue she was cheating.

Was running around on me.

It exploded like a bombshell.

It destroyed her imagery.

 

I thought I'd found happiness.

But it wasn't Meant to be.

Pre Chorus

Got an aching heart.

Got An aching head.

Wishing i was dead.

Chorus

She cheated broke my heart.

Really hit me hard.

Told me we were over.

Laid me up in bed.

My eyes bloody red.

With a love hangover.

Verse

I aint been sober for sometime.

The bartender knows my name.

When i go on about my troubles.

He says that's a crying shame.

 

I say pour another double.

Tell him buddy keep the change.

Pre Chorus

Got an aching heart.

Got an aching head.

Wishing i was dead.

Chorus

She cheated broke my heart.

Really hit me hard.

Told me we were over.

Laid me up in bed.

My eyes bloody red.

With a love hangover.

 

Trying something different rhyme wise.

 
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carroll kiphen


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NEIL COTTON
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Posts: 76
 

this very good...dig deeper on the second line as it says the same thing as the first

Had no notion she was cheating.

Was running around on me. ( wasted line)

I'm not sure the hook line will sing well...With a love hangover ....maybe "with my love hung over" ya weird????

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AllfortheLord
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ntro

We were mirror perfect.

Wore matching clothes.

I had no idea

of the thorns on  my rose 

 

Verse

Had no clue she was cheating.

Was running around on me.

It exploded like a bombshell.

to  destroy her imagery

This post was modified 7 years ago 2 times by AllfortheLord

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ckiphen
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Posts: 1478
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Thanks.

carroll kiphen


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