Uncle Arie's in the pirogue
workin Jacob's marsh
tryin to get him a boatload
shelling blackeyed peas
daddy's in the hospital
gettin brand new knees
Yeah that breeze ,yeah that breeze, flowin thru the misty mornin cypress trees
Yeah that breeze ,yeah that breeze, flowin thru the misty mornin cypress trees
You can hear him steady yelping
He hates them dang old fleas.
Kicking like he's playing the guitar.
Beneath that pecan tree.
carroll kiphen
thx I used the fleas part it worked
Ok
carroll kiphen
OK, I'm curious..... What’s the rhythm here?
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med slow kinda swamp rock style like CCR did
Uncle Arie's in the pirogue
workin Jacob's marsh
settin' traps n trotline
keeps an eye out for the law
shelling blackeyed peas
daddy's in the hoosegow
for bustin' someone's knee
sniffin' through the shells
them spicy creole season's
got him sneezin' like hell
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Old gators waiting nearby
Floating like a log.
Ain't sure whats on the menu
But his eyes on the hog.
carroll kiphen
Old gators waiting nearby
Floating like a log.
Ain't sure whats on the menu
But his eyes on the hog.
Nice! ?
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thx guys I'm kinda satisfied with it now and thanks to Carroll for giving it the final touch of words with the flea idea , now just someone to record it as I have it written
Can you write music?
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no
