@japov

Wonderful! I'll give it a shot!

I'm still messing around with it too..   🙂

slipping away, fading fast
about to lose my grasp
clinging to a yesterday
it's gone
a tender kiss, the ocean blue
the innocence of youth
unrelenting gravity
it's wrong

the brevity, the expectation
the ardency, the realization
a life of learning far behind the curve
a sense of knowing, then exploding
un-controlling, so annoying
all the swimmers quit without a word

blue, saffron, and fuchsia
it's twilight at Laguna...

serenity, floating weightless
sink or swim, defeat is tasteless
the ocean doesn't care
I see
catch a wave, catch some rays
count the stars, count the days
love me if you're lucky
just be

blue, saffron, and fuchsia
it's twilight at Laguna...?

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14115884

Very cool, Tony. Nice sultry, laid back vibe.

Thanks Gav!

Do you see now why I didn't want to sing it...? 🙂

I could hear a Door's type melody with the keyboard being the main  front sound and slight riffs from the guitar slow moving tempo, here's my addition to it 

slipping away, fading fast
about to lose my grasp 
clinging to a yesterday 

a tender kiss, the ocean blue
the innocence of my youth
is slowly fading away

blue, saffron, and fuchsia 
it's twilight at Laguna...
(lots of heavy organ sounds)

the brevity,  expectation 
the ardency, of  creation
a life of learning far behind the curve

a sense of knowin, without spoiling
un-controlling, so annoying 
all the swimmers quit without a word

blue, saffron, and fuchsia 
it's twilight at Laguna..

music breaks********

serenity, floating weightless 
sink or swim, defeat is tasteless 
the ocean doesn't care 

catch a wave, catch some rays
count the stars, count the days
if you love me you'll be there

blue, saffron blue,  and fuchsia 
it's twilight at Laguna..., blue saffron and fuchsia 
it's twilight at Laguna...

Ha! Nice twist 😉