Hold me in your arms
My soul is old My soul is tired
Cast away these doubts I hide
deep inside the truth resides
hold me in your arms Tonight
Find a place to testify
Climb the mountain touch the sky
Feel the warmth of gods embrace
help me Chase my fears away
I cannot deny I need a place
Just to Rest my Worried soul
Leave behind these troubled Times
So, hold me in your arms tonight
So, in one fit of rage
Seems I threw it all away
The life I love Gone instantly
As I close my eyes
it drifts away
If I fall from this mountain top
I have stumbled, But I have tried
The tears I shed Like falling rain
Hold me in your arms again
I cannot deny I need a place
Just to Rest my Worried soul
Leave behind these troubled Times
So, hold me in your arms tonight
C: J Carl Morris 8/19
https://www.reverbnation.com/johncarlmorris/song/32481488-hold-me-in-your-arms-acoustic
I like this a lot. There are other here who can probably offer more constructive feedback of a song with a religious theme, but I like the sincerity that comes across almost like an old spiritual. If I were to make one suggestion it would be to try changing the second and fourth verses by removing the brief guitar interval t the end of each line and launch straight into the next one, thus adding a bit of variety and turning it into a pre-chorus. I'm not sure that the result would be an improvement, just something that occurred to me as worth trying and seeing how it sounds.
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I thought about that, Its an easy mod on the tracks. I will see how that works.
I think the way it is, is because that's how it came out... If you get that...
Thax input is what I am looking for.
Sorry if I posted this maybe in wrong place.
