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ckiphen
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Force of nature

VERSE

You can’t tame a hurricane.

You can’t calm a quake.

If you’re planning to chain her.

It’s a big mistake.

Chorus

She’s a force to be reckoned with.

Don’t you try to cage her.

She’s nothing to be messing with.

She’s a force of nature.

Verse

You can’t stop an avalanche.

You can’t halt the tide.

You can’t control what she is.

You can’t change her mind.

Chorus

She’s a force to be reckoned with.

Don’t you try to cage her.

She’s nothing to be messing with.

She’s a force of nature.

Verse

You can’t slow a tornado.

You can’t cease the rain.

You can’t alter what she is.

She can’t be restrained.

Chorus

She’s a force to be reckoned with.

Don’t you try to cage her.

She’s nothing to be messing with.

She’s a force of nature.

Bridge

Only a fool goes chasing after

A natural disaster.

VERSE

You can’t tame a hurricane.

You can’t calm a quake.

If you’re planning to chain her.

It’s a big mistake.

Chorus

She’s a force to be reckoned with.

Don’t you try to cage her.

She’s nothing to be messing with.

She’s a force of nature.

carroll kiphen


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Deacon
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Hello Carroll, This is a pretty good write, kind of like trying to rope the wind, LOL, thanks for sharing.  good luck and best wishes,

Speak soon

 

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ckiphen
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Trying to lighten the mood. Nothing but doom and gloom on the news. Makes it difficult to have a positive outlook.

carroll kiphen


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Gavin
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I like this Carroll. Straightforward fun song. I don't really have any suggestions. I think it's fine as it is.

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ckiphen
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Thanks trying to keep it light

carroll kiphen


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