are we making a serious lyric  about gettin old ?

Not really. I wanted to use the worn out car as a comparison . Sort of self deprecation where the guy pokes a bit of fun at himself getting old. I like what we have but just entertaining any new lines that might come up. Never know when you can improve a lyric.

yes, but to insult it by dragging it in the sewer effect degrades what has been achieved, and I do think it is a lyric worthy of great vocals and music, and will be sung by others after hearing it

Fine we leave it as it is. This is why we post. To get honest feedback.

"The sewer? Degrading...?" I must be a bit older than you AllFor, I’ve got a prescription for every damn thing Lol... Putting a dab of gasoline behind your ear is an old joke from the 50's... It let’s girls you meet know you HAVE a car! ? 

@japov

I'm 68  never heard that

Stuck in the middle between two friends

I'm being pulled from both sides.

I'm damned if i do damned if i don't

These trains are bound to collide.

Tug of war tug of war.

They both say you choose.

Once we were all friends

Now we all will lose.

Tug of war tug of war

Now we will all lose.

Well.... I'm eternal! ? ?