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ckiphen
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It’s better to try and fail/ than never try at all

Verse

I need to explore a bit more.

See what’s there to see.

I need to know I’ve tried to be.

Be all I can be.

Chorus

You’ll never climb a mountain.

If you’re afraid you’ll fall.

It’s better to try and fail

Than never try at all.

Verse

Some people like to settle down.

Get in a routine.

That isn’t what I’m looking for.

I was born to dream.

Chorus

You’ll never climb a mountain.

If you’re afraid you’ll fall.

It’s better to try and fail

Than never try at all.

Bridge

I want to challenge myself

Do things that I haven’t done.

I know I’m growing older.

But my mind’s forever young.

Verse

I need to sample something new.

See if it’s for me.

I need to know I’ve lived my life.

In entirety.

Chorus

You’ll never climb a mountain.

If you’re afraid you’ll fall.

It’s better to try and fail

Than never try at all.

carroll kiphen


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Gavin
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Hi Carroll. It flows well, but to me it seems a little bit generic.

I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com


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YrralMallik
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Dream On Carroll.Enjoyed Da Read my friend.

 

 

Larry G. Killam


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Bernd
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Good advice.

Straight and simple, and flows beautifully. And generic is fine if it isn't country 😉


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ckiphen
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Thanks it was a quick write. Didn't put a lot of thought into it. When the flow well i just go with it.

 

carroll kiphen


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