As if I were the sun
Verse
I was a young man
Held a tiger by the tail;
Thought I’d change the world
Never thought I would fail.
I was a young man
With a foolish sense of pride,
thought I had it made,
wasn’t ready for life.
Chorus
I thought life revolved around me
As if I were the sun.
When it came to taking credit
I thought of number one.
I thought life revolved around me
As if I were the sun.
As if I were the sun.
As if I were the sun.
Verse
I was a young man
Saw a rainbow up ahead
Sought a pot of gold
found misery instead.
I was a young man
With a taste for finer things
Learned life the hard way
What being selfish brings.
Chorus
I thought life revolved around me
As if I were the sun.
When it came to taking credit
I thought of number one.
As if I were the sun.
As if I were the sun
As if I were the sun.
Bridge
Learned friendship was the gold I sought
Found giving brought me love
Found happiness comes far before
Thinking of number one.
Tag
As if I were the sun.
As if I were the sun.
As if I were the sun.
carroll kiphen
Very enjoyable. Sound like something I'd write myself, and the theme is inspiring.
I suggest making the structure a little less regular. That would add interest. Apart from that, I think it's well written 🙂
Thank you. Welcome on board.
carroll kiphen
Thanks i appreciate it. Check out The turning of the leaves under collaboration.
carroll kiphen
Hello Carroll, I like this lyric, though the first line in each verse might sing better as "When I was young", rather than "I was a young man". It may help to move from what you were to what you are, merely a suggestion. Good luck and best wishes,
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