Well....... I love the title  🙂

If I were to review your Face, I’d similarly note that I love the hat! 

@japov

Sorry hombre, that was a fresh out of bed, eff this guy response. It’s not intended to have any commercial appeal as a song, but I’m comfortable that it conveys what I hoped it would. That said if ya wanna say you hate it, just say you hate it. My tolerance for passive aggression is low. That said, sorry for chirpin’ your face. It is, after all, just a face ?

Ha! Lolol............... Truth be told, the title is the only reason I listened!

"""I think it’s kind of neat, but I’m worried the narrative may not be clear enough to understand"""

On that note..... Yea, sorry, I don’t get it at all.... But I do truly admire your tenacity and willingness to just "put it out there"! I hope I'm reading you right and you actually do have a good sense of humor about all this. I’ve learned that a little "passive aggressiveness" goes a long way in today’s hyper sensitive politically correct world..... But I’m still brutally honest among friends 🙂

@japov

We’re all good buddy. I’m aware this sort of tune ain’t your cup of tea, so I’m not offended by that whatsoever. And on the tenacity thing, thanks! Learned a long time ago I can’t tell what’s good and not so my policy’s just toss everything I write out there and let someone else decide (hence the like 80 tracks I think I’ve uploaded this year... which are almost overwhelmingly filler). 

As far as the brutal honesty thing, I get ya. As I always say, if I didn’t tell you when I hated it you’d never believe me when I say I like that one! Anyways, hope your week’s goin’ well buddy. No hard feelings here. 

Cheers

Well now, hang on there a sec..... I still feel like you’re just blowing me off! And as far as "my cup of tea" is concerned, trust me.... you have no idea lol. How about telling us your motivation/inspiration behind this one and then perhaps we can offer better feedback. ? 

@japov

Aw, damn it! Alright, ummm.... I guess to explain it I’m going to have to backpedal and admit I know it’s not my finest effort. The first verse/chorus isn’t specifically inspired by anything, just classic brooding crap. That part I actually like, lyrically. The part where it sort of flips vibes was inspired by post-music festival fatigue mixed w/ self-pity at learning a girl I was hitting it off with there is in a committed relationship :/ (frustrating stuff). Tbh I was feeling musically uninspired and stuck on both so I amalgamated them into one with an instrumental I’d written independently of them... so this song’s basically just Frankenstein, sewn together from the parts of old dead bodies 😛 I agree with you the title’s cool though! Btw one last time sorry for my dick comment this morning. Uncalled for and probably driven by my knowing the song kinda sucks. I always appreciate the feedback, even when it’s brutally honest. Cheers

You know, the cool thing about songwriting is that they can always be re-written! Since you’ve already "Frankensteined" this one lol, why not go ahead and write another verse about what just happened here? 

Daily brooding

Two bit hack in a cowboy hat

met/lost girl

Two bit hack in a cowboy hat 

told my story

Two bit hack in a cowboy hat 

wrote this song

Two bit hack in a cowboy hat 

Became Millionaire

Two bit hack in a cowboy hat .....  🙂

@japov

Hahaha, you know what? I think I’ll do that. Haven’t written a song about writing a song in a while, and I think this one’s probably best to walk away from until something clicks on one of those lyric sets. Thanks again buddy, I think I needed someone to push me a bit to admit I’m not happy with it

Enjoyed Da Listen my friend