Thank you for thinking of me, Deacon. I'm afraid I'm going to have to let you down on this one though. I have singing commitments going back to 2017 that I have yet to complete so I am not taking anything else on (unless it's something like the Christchurch tribute which I really had no choice but to make).
Best,
Jen

Hello Jen, I totally understand, been there done that, hope you get caught up.  Best wishes,

Speak soon

OK finally back from my work travels and did a little work on this song. I kind of just went with it so hopefully the lyrics would fit into this version. FYI the lead guitar levels may be a little high but they'd be adjusted when mixing in vocals.

Hello John,

I played it through and sang to it several times, I really believe it will work.  At 2.15  through 2.37, your solo kicks in, after that you have an outro, wonder if I need to write anything for that, what are your thoughts.  In the mean time I will practice the vocals and get the timing down.  This sounds great, best wishes,

Speak soon 

OK Cool. I'd say to sing an outro and then we can see if it fits in. Jen and I do this all the time. She will write lyrics and sing an outro and sometimes we put it in and other times after listening to the song as a whole, with vocals, we decide to leave it out. Every song is different.