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18/05/2019 4:26 pm
Was working on this over the afternoon. Hopefully the vocals are easier to understand.
https://soundcloud.com/user-804172376-210408674/the-way-you-treat-you
https://m.soundcloud.com/rhys-rj-fraser/sets/on-a-song-that-i-wrote
20/05/2019 7:06 am
One word comes to mind with this song. Juxtaposition. 🙂
The title vs the content was the first contrast that jumped out at me. Then you just keep dishing them out. Intriguing Rhys.
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20/05/2019 10:15 am
Thanks! I’m actually still trying to decide whether I should stick with “The Way You Treat You”, or whether “Good Friends” is better. I think the first has more to it, but I think it may be a bit wordy. Really not sure tbh
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https://m.soundcloud.com/rhys-rj-fraser/sets/on-a-song-that-i-wrote
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20/05/2019 4:12 pm
Haha, I changed it to good friends on sc after I posted it, was thinking it was a better title. I think I’ll stick with that one if it was the one to which you were referring. It’s tidier and makes the point ?
https://m.soundcloud.com/rhys-rj-fraser/sets/on-a-song-that-i-wrote
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