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15/10/2021 9:36 am
https://soundcloud.com/carroll-kiphen/stupid-heart-of-mine-demo?si=53800583136a4df4bb5ca9dcde17b09c
Stupid, Stupid Heart
Verse
My eyes told me she’s beautiful.
My mind said boy beware.
My heart said you can do this man
Just walk right over there.
Strike up a conversation
Turn the charm to high.
Ignore the warning signals
From the voice inside.
Chorus
Stupid heart of mine.
Had to have its way.
Had to play with fire.
Get burned by the flame.
Stupid, stupid heart
Had to have its way.
Stupid, stupid heart
Had to have its way.
Verse
My eyes were taking measurements.
My mind said boy be scared.
My heart said she looks innocent.
My mind said don’t you dare.
I was weak, I was falling
No net was below.
My mind had tried to warn me.
Better take it slow.
Chorus
Stupid heart of mine.
Had to have its way.
Had to play with fire.
Get burned by the flame.
Stupid, stupid heart
Had to have its way.
Stupid, stupid heart
Had to have its way.
Bridge
She took me in, deceived me.
Then she done me wrong.
My mind had tried to warn me
Now my monies gone.
Verse
My eyes told me she’s beautiful.
My mind said boy beware.
My heart said you can do this man
Just walk right over there.
Strike up a conversation
Turn the charm to high.
Ignore the warning signals
From the voice inside.
Chorus
Stupid heart of mine.
Had to have its way.
Had to play with fire.
Get burned by the flame.
Stupid, stupid heart
Had to have its way.
Stupid, stupid heart
Had to have its way.
This topic was modified 4 years ago by ckiphen
carroll kiphen
YrralMallik liked
15/10/2021 11:07 am
Wow, that singer really squeezes every drop of emotion out of this - great job! Having said that, it's a pity he doesn't sing more clearly. It might just be me, but it's really hard to make out a word he's singing until he gets to the chorus. That's a problem in a song like this where the words matter. Also, I think it might benefit from being just a little faster. Not a lot, just a little. I think it has a great melody and the hook works for me. I can't really comment on the lyric as a whole because I can't make it out.
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15/10/2021 3:51 pm
Added the lyrics
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