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Guy E. Trepanier
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Here is one of my songs.
Rough demo: My voice + ukulele

SEE YOU TONIGHT
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© Words and music: Guy E. Trépanier, 2021.
All rights reserved by Guy E. Trépanier.

Intro: 4 bars (key of D)

I'm gonna see you tonight
I wanna hold you so tight
You make me feel so eager
I wanna be your lover

I'll sing you a funny song
Showing how much I belong
I hope you'll give me a chance
To start with you a romance

I wish that I could be tame in your arms
I wish that you would feel pleased in my arms

I'm gonna see you tonight
My heart is fully delight
My body feels such fever
For I could be your lover

Interlude 8 bars

I'm gonna see you tonight
I wanna hold you so tight
You make me feel so eager
I wanna be your lover

I'll bring you some fancy food
To put you right in the mood
With a bottle of red wine
I'll put a spark in your mind

I wish that I could be tame in your arms
I wish that you would feel pleased in my arms

I'm gonna see you tonight
My heart is fully delight
My body feels such fever
For I could be your lover

I'm gonna see you tonight
I'm gonna see you tonight

Guy E. Trépanier #516
Melody: Jan - Feb 2021. Lyrics: Jan - Feb 2021.

K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple and Singable
https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=588312
https://soundcloud.com/guyetrep : in English (my voice + ukulele)
https://soundcloud.com/guyechante : en Français (in french)
https://soundcloud.com/user-380042223 : songs with lyricists
https://www.reverbnation.com/control_room/artist/1969477/songs


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YrralMallik
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Enjoyed Da Listen Guy.

Larry G. Killam


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Gavin
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Posts: 943
 

I always enjoy your bouncy melodies, Guy, and this is no exception 🙂

A couple of suggestions about the lyric.

I'm gonna see you tonight
My heart is full of delight
My body feels shivers all over
Tonight I could be your lover

It rhymes a bit better and creates a feeling of expectation specific to the night mentioned in the first line/title, which I think adds interest.

I wish that I could be lying your arms
I wish that you would feel happy in my arms

I changed tame to lying because I think it makes more sense. And I think happy is stronger than pleased.

All just suggestions, of course, and not all my suggestions are good ones 🙂

I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com


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