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10/01/2022 4:34 pm
Here is one of my songs.
Rough demo: My voice + ukulele
SEE YOU TONIGHT
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© Words and music: Guy E. Trépanier, 2021.
All rights reserved by Guy E. Trépanier.
Intro: 4 bars (key of D)
I'm gonna see you tonight
I wanna hold you so tight
You make me feel so eager
I wanna be your lover
I'll sing you a funny song
Showing how much I belong
I hope you'll give me a chance
To start with you a romance
I wish that I could be tame in your arms
I wish that you would feel pleased in my arms
I'm gonna see you tonight
My heart is fully delight
My body feels such fever
For I could be your lover
Interlude 8 bars
I'm gonna see you tonight
I wanna hold you so tight
You make me feel so eager
I wanna be your lover
I'll bring you some fancy food
To put you right in the mood
With a bottle of red wine
I'll put a spark in your mind
I wish that I could be tame in your arms
I wish that you would feel pleased in my arms
I'm gonna see you tonight
My heart is fully delight
My body feels such fever
For I could be your lover
I'm gonna see you tonight
I'm gonna see you tonight
Guy E. Trépanier #516
Melody: Jan - Feb 2021. Lyrics: Jan - Feb 2021.
K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple and Singable
https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=588312
https://soundcloud.com/guyetrep : in English (my voice + ukulele)
https://soundcloud.com/guyechante : en Français (in french)
https://soundcloud.com/user-380042223 : songs with lyricists
https://www.reverbnation.com/control_room/artist/1969477/songs
YrralMallik liked
17/01/2022 6:06 pm
I always enjoy your bouncy melodies, Guy, and this is no exception 🙂
A couple of suggestions about the lyric.
I'm gonna see you tonight
My heart is full of delight
My body feels shivers all over
Tonight I could be your lover
It rhymes a bit better and creates a feeling of expectation specific to the night mentioned in the first line/title, which I think adds interest.
I wish that I could be lying your arms
I wish that you would feel happy in my arms
I changed tame to lying because I think it makes more sense. And I think happy is stronger than pleased.
All just suggestions, of course, and not all my suggestions are good ones 🙂
I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com
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