Here is one of my songs.
Rough demo: My voice + ukulele
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OOH LALA LA OOH (e)
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© Words and music: Guy E. Trépanier, 2023.
All rights reserved by Guy E. Trépanier.
Intro: 8 bars (key of A)
She was right there in front of me
Wearing a tight blue sexy dress
She turned around and look at me
Then she gave me a killer smile
With a subtle ravishing voice
She said to me: you're a good choice!
Ooh lala lalalala --- chorus
Ooh lala la Ooh
Ooh lala lalalala
Ooh lala la Ooh
Ooh lala lalalala
Ooh lala la Ooh
Ooh lala lalalala
Ooh lala la Ooh
Then she came very close to me
While she took off her sexy dress
She whispered: Babe I like to play
I'm gonna make you play my way
With a subtle ravishing voice
She said to me: you're a good choice!
Chorus
Interlude: 8 bars
Then she decided to leave the room
While she put back her sexy dress
She gave me a sweet little kiss
She left me there with my own bliss
With a subtle ravishing voice
She said to me: you're a good choice!
Chorus
Ooh lala la Ooh
Guy E. Trépanier #628
Melody and lyrics: 2023-11.
K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple and Singable
https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=588312
https://soundcloud.com/guyetrep : in English (my voice + ukulele)
https://soundcloud.com/guyechante : en Français (in french)
https://soundcloud.com/user-380042223 : songs with lyricists
https://www.reverbnation.com/control_room/artist/1969477/songs
I love the lyrics in the chorus! actually, I do like all those "ooh la la"s. They suit the jaunty melody. However, I think one time is enough rather than repeating it.
Nice slice of life song.
I may or may not be an enigma
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