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Guy E. Trepanier
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Here is one of my songs.
Rough demo: My voice + ukulele

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14403336

ONLY YOU, ONLY YOU
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Words and Music: Guy E. Trépanier, 2006 - 2021.
All rights reserved by Guy E. Trépanier.

Intro: 4 bars (Key of D)

You stir me with your walk
You spice me with your charm
You spin me with your warmth
You spoil me with your talk

I really, really don't know why
I've got that lust for you
I really, really don't know why
I'm so crazy 'bout you

Only you, only you
I wanna be with you
Only you, only you
I need to be with you

You spike me with your style
You strap me with your hips
You stamp me with your lips
You stroke me with your smile

I really, really don't know why
I've got that lust for you
I really, really don't know why
I'm so crazy 'bout you

Only you, only you
I wanna be with you
Only you, only you
I need to be with you

Come closer, baby, come closer
Show me your foxy eyes
Come closer, baby, come closer
Bring me to seventh sky

I really, really don't know why
I've got that lust for you
I really, really don't know why
I'm so crazy 'bout you

Only you, only you
I wanna be with you
Only you, only you
I need to be with you

Only you, only you
I wanna be with you
Only you, only you
I need to be with you

Only you, only you

Guy E. Trepanier #525
Song created in March 2006. Revised: March 2021.

K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple and Singable
https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=588312
https://soundcloud.com/guyetrep : in English (my voice + ukulele)
https://soundcloud.com/guyechante : en Français (in french)
https://soundcloud.com/user-380042223 : songs with lyricists
https://www.reverbnation.com/control_room/artist/1969477/songs


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Gary E. Andrews
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I'm imagining a calypso or steel drum Song in a movie soundtrack. Which could be very lucrative. They're always looking for Songs to enhance the scenes.

Despite 1,000's of years of Songwriting humans have not exhausted the possibilities. There will always be another Song to be written. Someone will write it. Why not you? www.garyeandrews.com


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Gavin
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I found myself singing along to the chorus. That has to be good! Very catchy. My only suggestion would be to replace the word "lust" with something else. That word has a kind of negative connotation. Maybe "I have that longing for you" or just "I feel the way I do."

Cute song.

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