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10/05/2020 10:48 pm
I-I might +never see the light
an' I might +never get it right
but maybe I can try-y.
Don't know if I-I can mend your heart
and give +you a brand new start
but baby, let me try-y.
Give me a +chance to ma-ake you happy,
give me a chance to set you free,
I only know, that I don't really know,
but I can try, +please let me try.
Can't see the future, can't even guess
if I can e-end your loneliness
but maybe I can try-y
I got a thing or two to say
maybe I'll get you to see it my way,
oh baby, le-et me try-y
Oh if I +had a +million dollars
I would bet it all on you
an' if I +only +ha-ad fore-ever
there's not a thing that I couldn't do.
Oh I might +never win the prize,
might never +see love in your eyes,
but maybe I can try-y.
Still got a lo-ong way to go,
still got a +whole lot I don't know,
but baby, oh please, let me try-y.
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11/05/2020 10:26 am
That's some good old-style country in my book. It's very strong on THE Hook, driving home that Line as the title, the main idea, a Refrain-Type Chorus.
The Lyric and Melody share the Melancholy well. There's an element of hope in the Lyric, saving it from over-sad or hopelessness.
The 'million dollars' Lines are appealing, 'bet it all on you'. They seem to be sung to the same Melody as the Bridge, 'Give me a chance', which repeats at the end.
It's Structurally 'odd' perhaps, but for the style and Melody and Lyrical storyline, I think it can work. Your repertoire is growing!
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11/05/2020 11:21 am
That's some good old-style country in my book. It's very strong on THE Hook, driving home that Line as the title, the main idea, a Refrain-Type Chorus.
The Lyric and Melody share the Melancholy well. There's an element of hope in the Lyric, saving it from over-sad or hopelessness.The 'million dollars' Lines are appealing, 'bet it all on you'. They seem to be sung to the same Melody as the Bridge, 'Give me a chance', which repeats at the end.
It's Structurally 'odd' perhaps, but for the style and Melody and Lyrical storyline, I think it can work. Your repertoire is growing!
Thanks! I'm glad it sounds like old-style country!
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