Martin, I've said elsewhere that you are the king of heartache. I'm revising that title to Emperor. The lyrics here are absolutely spot-on. They have to be to hold us for five and a half minutes. Production, vocals - there's nothing not to absolutely love about this.

Thanks Gavin.

Appreciate that you provided an outlet for songs.

Marty

I'll second that. It's rare that I'll sit and listen to a five minute song TWICE IN A ROW with my attention focused on the song the ENTIRE time. I wanted the second listen to catch anything wonderful I'd missed the first time.

If I had to pick something to change it would be the enunciation of "leave the air." I didn't hear it the first time through and had to really focus to hear that line on the second pass...but that's just splitting straws. I love it.

Jen

Thanks Jen. Very much.

It's hard for a song to attract a complete listen. Two listens does not happen much in a world saturated with songs.

I deeply appreciate that you did.

This song is the first in a seven song story that I'm still working on. All the songs are written and produced but some tweaking remains to do.

I will get with Mike, the producer, and see if we can clarify "leave the air." As expressions go, it's a little odd and unfamiliar and that may be part of the problem also.

Thanks again,

Martin

My pleasure Martin.

Just came back for a third.  ? 

Brilliant writing! Very good!

Thanks ckiphen

Brilliant? No, but I try hard to be good.  🙂

Martin