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18/06/2021 11:22 am
Music and vocals David Lekitch / lyrics Carroll kiphen
https://soundcloud.com/carroll-kiphen/fifteen-feet
Fifteen feet away/ distant star
Verse
You light the room with your smile.
I wish you shined for me.
If I could have but one wish
It’d be that you loved me.
Pre chorus
How I wish, how I wish
You’ll be mine someday.
Distant star, distant star
So, so far away
Chorus
This room is a galaxy
Yet you’re fifteen feet away.
Fifteen, feet, fifteen feet away.
Verse
It breaks my heart you don’t see
The way I look at you.
If I could kiss you one time
It’d be my dream come true.
Pre chorus
How I wish, how I wish
You’ll be mine someday.
Distant star, distant star
So, so far away
Chorus
This room is a galaxy
Yet you’re fifteen feet away.
Fifteen, feet, fifteen feet away.
Bridge
I lay awake at night
Gaze out at the sky
Dream of my distant star
The way your smile shines.
Tag
It feels like a billion miles
But you’re fifteen feet away.
carroll kiphen
11/07/2021 9:25 pm
Great song ! . . . deviates from the lyric as written here in places, but all good, keeps the idea and grows on it. RE: the mix . . . the vocal and low bass sound sound balanced . . . but, the drums and guitar are coming across as very thin to my ears . . . like the mid range got dipped there too much ? Really like the vocals, and especially the back up echo vocals.
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11/07/2021 10:52 pm
Credit goes to Deejay from Just Plain Folks. All I do r the words. Thanks!!
carroll kiphen
11/08/2021 3:10 pm
Cool tune! Glad to see some of your stuff coming to life Carroll!
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