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Fifteen Feet


ckiphen
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Music and vocals David Lekitch / lyrics Carroll kiphen

 

Fifteen feet away/ distant star

Verse

You light the room with your smile.

I wish you shined for me.

If I could have but one wish

It’d be that you loved me.

Pre chorus

How I wish, how I wish

You’ll be mine someday.

Distant star, distant star

So, so far away

Chorus

This room is a galaxy

Yet you’re fifteen feet away.

Fifteen, feet, fifteen feet away.

Verse

It breaks my heart you don’t see

The way I look at you.

If I could kiss you one time

It’d be my dream come true.

Pre chorus

How I wish, how I wish

You’ll be mine someday.

Distant star, distant star

So, so far away

Chorus

This room is a galaxy

Yet you’re fifteen feet away.

Fifteen, feet, fifteen feet away.

Bridge

I lay awake at night

Gaze out at the sky

Dream of my distant star

The way your smile shines.

Tag

It feels like a billion miles

But you’re fifteen feet away.

carroll kiphen


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popitup
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Great song !  . . . deviates from the lyric as written here in places, but all good, keeps the idea and grows on it. RE: the mix . . . the vocal and low bass sound sound balanced . . . but, the drums and guitar are coming across as very thin to my ears . . . like the mid range got dipped there too much ? Really like the vocals, and especially the back up echo vocals.


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ckiphen
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Credit goes to Deejay from Just Plain Folks. All I do r the words. Thanks!! 

carroll kiphen


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John Evans
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Cool tune! Glad to see some of your stuff coming to life Carroll!

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