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14/02/2024 10:03 am
Here is one of my songs.
Rough demo: My voice + ukulele
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14728920
EASY ON THE EYES
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© Words and music: Guy E. Trépanier, 2023.
All rights reserved by Guy E. Trépanier.
Intro: 4 bars (key of D)
She's such a lovely girl
Astounding funny girl
And she's my buddy girl
She's looking very swell
She makes me ring my bell
And it's easy to tell
She's easy on the eyes
She may tease a lot of guys
She's easy on the eyes
Day by day she may surprise
.... .... .... ....
She loves to rock and roll
She likes to take control
She's up to reach her goal
She likes to wear blue jeans
Her teeth are always clean
And you know what I mean
She's easy on the eyes
She may tease a lot of guys
She's easy on the eyes
Day by day she may surprise
Interlude: 8 bars
She does her groceries
She bakes her own cookies
And she buys novelties
She has an open mind
She believes in mankind
And she's one of a kind
She's easy on the eyes
She may tease a lot of guys
She's easy on the eyes
Day by day she may surprise
She's easy on the eyes
She may tease a lot of guys
She's easy on the eyes
Day by day she may surprise
Easy on the eyes
Guy E. Trépanier #614
Melody and lyrics: 2023-04.
K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple and Singable
https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=588312
https://soundcloud.com/guyetrep : in English (my voice + ukulele)
https://soundcloud.com/guyechante : en Français (in french)
https://soundcloud.com/user-380042223 : songs with lyricists
https://www.reverbnation.com/control_room/artist/1969477/songs
14/02/2024 3:42 pm
A nice jaunty melody, as usual from you, Guy. Easy on the ears 🙂
I like lyrics like this that basically present a list in an amusing way, in this case a list of her characteristics and the things she likes to do. Having said that, there are maybe a few lines that just feel like they are there for the rhyme and to pad out the verse, without contributing much. Lines like...
She's up to reach her goal
And she buys novelties
I enjoyed it!
I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com
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