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11/03/2020 8:53 am
Just finished this. Put way more hours into it than usual, hopefully that shows on listening. I'll post the first verse lyrics below, the rest is inaudible anyways so I'll skip it 😛 Cheers
Painting dots of white so dark against the light behind that I
Can't help but be blinded by ecliptic bypass liquid crystal shine
That can't be right
it's LED I cross my eyes
Erase the line and blow my mind
And everything looks bright outside
The blinding glare of night
Stands ideally by reminding me
No sleep means feeling fine
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I'll be alright until tomorrow
No, wait, how can it be time?
I stood in line I gave my dime
I'm tripping out no I'm alright
The slightest slight a slight lift to my mind unnaturally inclined to fight
Unfrightened by the silence breaking my
Reliance on the way I try to check my mind
Remind myself that I'm just my perception
Times my days behind which calculated by selection just weren't right every time
And some of them went uncorrected
And I that's why
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First I tried to make a milly on a quarter ounce
Spun half toked passed gas laughed ate passed out
Woke up then spent the morning tryna figure out
How to make a milly on a quarter ounce
Then was like oh shit right that's how
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If I take it from the rich
And then I give it to the poor
And then I wait a little bit
The rich'll only give me more
So I bought a quarter ounce
Of snowy shit then hit the store
Went home to mix and boiled it
And as I cracked the snow I roared
https://m.soundcloud.com/rhys-rj-fraser/sets/on-a-song-that-i-wrote
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11/03/2020 3:09 pm
Hey Gavin. Umm, fair question. I spliced two distinct lyric sets together, partly because I couldn't finish either and partly because I was hoping they'd work together and grow into more of a story. It went badly and I gave up, and between the delivery of the second part (believe it or not way worse than the first), the not succeeding in pulling the plots together into one story, and my general frustration at things not working right, I settled on leaving the audio but layering it into a jumbled mess and moving on. I know that's probably not the right way to do things, but I wanted to be done with it and didn't want to throw away the prior hours of work on it. Sorry if I'm rambling, hopefully that answered your question. Cheers
https://m.soundcloud.com/rhys-rj-fraser/sets/on-a-song-that-i-wrote
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12/03/2020 11:09 am
Haha, definitely don't think you're being rude! Ya give great feedback and I always appreciate it. I cleaned up the track a bit, and I'm feeling better about it today than yesterday, but as far as the lack of sensible narrative, I guess this one is what it is 😛 Hope you're doing great man, and thanks again! Cheers
https://m.soundcloud.com/rhys-rj-fraser/sets/on-a-song-that-i-wrote
12/03/2020 11:25 am
You have to read the lyrics Gav... The answer is always there... Lol ?Â
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12/03/2020 11:35 am
Agreed, but if you are just listening, you're lost.Â
I may or may not be an enigma
http://mysteriousbeings.com
12/03/2020 11:46 am
I think that’s the trick he’s playing Gav... He'll never have any trouble with the censors...
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12/03/2020 1:09 pm
Hahahaha, right? If they can't understand it, you can say literally anything! 😛
https://m.soundcloud.com/rhys-rj-fraser/sets/on-a-song-that-i-wrote
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