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27/03/2019 7:22 pm
Here is one of my songs.
Rough demo: My voice + ukulele
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13847761
CRUSH ON YOU
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© Words and music: Guy E. Trépanier, 2018.
All rights reserved: Guy E. Trépanier.
If you like my songs, please donate:
https://www.paypal.me/guyetrep
Intro: 8 bars (key of D)
I didn't see it coming
It took me by surprise
I never saw the warning
That was there in your eyes
I have a crush, such a big crush,
I have a crush on you
I have a crush, such a big crush,
I have a crush on you
You make me feel so dreamy
When you are by my side
I want a place for both we
A place where we can hide
I have a crush, such a big crush,
I have a crush on you
I have a crush, such a big crush,
I have a crush on you
Instrumental: 8 bars
I wanna be your lover
I will be fair and strong
Hope we can stay together
Hope we can get along
I have a crush, such a big crush,
I have a crush on you
I have a crush, such a big crush,
I have a crush on you
I have a crush, such a big crush,
I have a crush on you
I have a crush, such a big crush,
I have a crush on you
I have a crush on you
Guy E. Trepanier #348
Melody: sept 2018. Lyrics: sept 2018.
K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple and Singable
https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=588312
https://soundcloud.com/guyetrep : in English (my voice + ukulele)
https://soundcloud.com/guyechante : en Français (in french)
https://soundcloud.com/user-380042223 : songs with lyricists
https://www.reverbnation.com/control_room/artist/1969477/songs
30/03/2019 3:08 am
Hello Guy. Nice upbeat, happy vibe here. In the second verse the word "we" doesn't seem to be the right choice (grammatically speaking). Would it work to sing "of us" instead? It would need to be sung quickly so that it would take no more time than "we" would take to sing.
You make me feel so dreamy
When you are by my side
I want a place for both of us
A place where we can hide
Thank you for sharing.
Jen
https://soundcloud.com/jennystokes-nz
http://evansandstokes.com
https://www.facebook.com/evansandstokes/
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