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Guy E. Trepanier
(@guy-e-trepanier)
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08/05/2019 1:19 pm  

Here is one of my songs.
Rough demo: My voice + ukulele

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13873614

BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL
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© Words and music: Guy E. Trépanier, 2018.
All rights reserved: Guy E. Trépanier.

If you like my songs, please donate:
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Intro: 8 bars (key of D)

She wears a tight silky dress
That reveals a shoulder
I would like to caress
If I get close to her

Beautiful, beautiful
Beautiful lady
Beautiful, beautiful
Beautiful lady

She has long blond curly hair
That she whips with her hand
I would play truth or dare
To meet her in her land

Beautiful, beautiful
Beautiful lady
Beautiful, beautiful
Beautiful lady

Instrumental: 8 bars

She has a sensual voice
That can lighten a song
I don't have any choice
Than play and sing along

Beautiful, beautiful
Beautiful lady
Beautiful, beautiful
Beautiful lady

Beautiful, beautiful
Beautiful lady
Beautiful, beautiful
Beautiful lady

.... .... .... ....

Guy E. Trepanier #346
Melody: july - august 2018. Lyrics: july - august 2018.

This topic was modified 1 month ago by Guy E. Trepanier

K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple and Singable
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https://soundcloud.com/guyetrep
https://soundcloud.com/guyechante


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Gary E. Andrews
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Joined: 2 months ago
Posts: 39
09/05/2019 12:21 pm  

Guy! I saw her first! LOL
This has a gentle 'island music' feel. I'd love to hear it with steel drum and full band.

Some ideas;

BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL
_______________________________________________
© Words and music: Guy E. Trépanier, 2018.
All rights reserved: Guy E. Trépanier.

If you like my songs, please donate:
https://www.paypal.me/guyetrep

Intro: 8 bars (key of D)

She wears a tight silky dress
That reveals a shoulder
I would like to caress (like? love?)
If I get close to her (If I ever got to hold her)

Beautiful, beautiful
Beautiful lady
Beautiful, beautiful
Beautiful lady

She has long blond curly hair (Can I teach a Frenchman that 'blond' is masculine, 'blonde' feminine? LOL)
That she whips with her hand (She whips it with her hand)
I would play truth or dare
To meet her in her land

Beautiful, beautiful
Beautiful lady
Beautiful, beautiful
Beautiful lady

Instrumental: 8 bars (I've taken to labeling this an 'Instrumental Bridge'. It serves the same function as a Lyrical Bridge, breaking the Repetition to renew listener interest.)

She has a sensual voice
That can lighten a song (She can lighten a song)
I don't have any choice
Than play and sing along (But to play and sing along)

Beautiful, beautiful
Beautiful lady
Beautiful, beautiful
Beautiful lady

Beautiful, beautiful
Beautiful lady
Beautiful, beautiful
Beautiful lady

.... .... .... ....

Guy E. Trepanier #346
Melody: july - august 2018. Lyrics: july - august 2018.

I think "Beautiful, Beautiful" succeeds in your K.I.S.S. philosophy. It simply expresses admiration for an idol of loveliness, without entangling itself in extraneous details or psychological explanations.  I'm imagining you dancing with her to this music! How elegant!

This post was modified 1 month ago 2 times by Gary E. Andrews

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Guy E. Trepanier
(@guy-e-trepanier)
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Joined: 3 months ago
Posts: 13
04/06/2019 9:01 pm  

Many thanks for listening and commenting.

If someone is interested by the chord progression,
click this link (one page pdf file):

Box link: BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL (1 page lead sheet music)

https://app.box.com/s/emj9iaqmk7utt60hmdjbnkcqxlf6dclg

If you like my songs, please donate:
https://www.paypal.me/guyetrep
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Have fun!

p.s: Special thanks to Gary for his remarks. Very useful.

 

K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple and Singable
https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=588312
https://soundcloud.com/guyetrep
https://soundcloud.com/guyechante


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JAPOV
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Joined: 3 months ago
Posts: 270
07/06/2019 6:25 pm  

Hey Guy! Sweet-n-simple as usual! Good to see you here. 😎 


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