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The good and bad in me


ckiphen
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The good and bad in me

Verse

I heard a gentle tapping on the windowpane.

It had just begun to rain.

I saw the lighting and heard the thunder rumble.

More than the weather had changed.

Pre chorus

My view of the world was distorted.

I was busy waging a war.

There’d be no peaceful resolution.

Only the echoes of the storm.

Chorus

I was inside looking out.

I was torn in between

What’s real and what is a dream.

The good and bad in me.

Verse

The wind whistled thru the trees, like a howling wolf.

Branches scratched upon the roof.

It was the call of the wild for this wayward child.

A man in search of the truth.

Pre chorus

My view of the world is distorted.

I was busy waging a war.

There’d be no peaceful resolution.

Only the echoes of the storm.

Chorus

I was inside looking out.

I was torn in between

What’s real and what’s a dream.

The good and bad in me.

Bridge

Shrouded by clouds of depression.

My spirit longed to fly.  

the ebb and flow of my conscience

 slave to the changing tides.

Verse

I heard a gentle tapping on the windowpane.

It had just begun to rain.

I saw the lighting and heard the thunder rumble.

More than the weather had changed.

Pre chorus

My view of the world was distorted.

I was busy waging a war.

There’d be no peaceful resolution.

Only the echoes of the storm.

Chorus

I was inside looking out.

I was torn in between

What’s real and what is a dream.

The good and bad in me.

carroll kiphen


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JAPOV
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Me...

A gentle tapping on the windowpane
It has just begun to rain
Lighting strikes and thunder rumbles
Seems the weather has changed

Natural life distorted
The grotesquerie of war
No peaceful resolution
Only echoes of the storm

My soul is inside out
My brother is the enemy
Come the flood of flesh and blood
The harbinger of death is me

Deadly night, a crouching wolf
Moonlit yellow eyes
Innocent child of the wild
Paints his face a disguise

Justified by inherent faith
Cursed by dutiful indiscretion
A story told that's ages old
Of a king's morbid obsessions

My soul is inside out
My brother is the enemy
Come the flood of flesh and blood
The harbinger of death is me

Lighting strikes and thunder rumbles...

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ckiphen
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Posts: 1478
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Good re-write.

carroll kiphen


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