She’s all you think about
Chorus
When you lie down with an angel
It does strange things to your soul.
It changes how you look at life
when love begins to grow.
You know that she’s the one.
There never was a doubt.
Twenty four hours a day
She’s all you think about.
Verse
You think about the way she smiles
When she looks at you;
The way her eyes can mesmerize
And change from green to blue.
You think about her soft smooth skin
and how she turns you on.
When she slips in bed beside you
You’re just as good as gone.
Chorus
When you lie down with an angel
It does strange things to your soul.
It changes how you look at life
when love begins to grow.
You know that she’s the one.
There never was a doubt.
Twenty four hours a day
She’s all you think about.
Verse
You think about the way she laughs
when she is amused.
You can’t help but feeling lucky
That she’s in love with you.
You think about the late night talks
when you’re sharing dreams.
It makes you wonder to yourself
if this can really be.
Bridge
She’s on your mind all the time
Your lives are intertwined.
you’re hypnotized, mesmerized
you’re in love for life.
(Repeat 1st verse and chorus)
Verse
You think about the way she smiles
When she looks at you;
The way her eyes can mesmerize
And change from green to blue.
You think about her soft smooth skin
and how she turns you on.
When she slips in bed beside you
You’re just as good as gone.
Chorus
When you lie down with an angel
It does strange things to your soul.
It changes how you look at life
when love begins to grow.
You know that she’s the one.
There never was a doubt.
Twenty four hours a day
She’s all you think about.
carroll kiphen
A good simple love song. I have a couple of suggestions. Firstly, I don't like the line "when she is amused." It feels like filler. It's a wasted line saying nothing - when else is she going to laugh? You could change....
You think about the way she laughs
when she is amused.
You can’t help but feeling lucky
That she’s in love with you.
to...
You think about the way she laughs
And the funny things she'll do
You can’t help but feeling lucky
That she’s in love with you.
or...
You think about the way she laughs
And the way that you laugh too
You can’t help but feeling lucky
That she’s in love with you.
The other suggestion I have is just to add a bit more visual quality and rhythmic variety, changing...
You think about the late night talks
when you’re sharing dreams.
The nights you sit up all night talking
Sharing dreams.
There's a natural pause at the start of the second line, which fits well when you sing it (one reason I hate counting syllables)
Just ideas. It's fine as it is.
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http://mysteriousbeings.com
How about instead of amused. When you play it cool?
carroll kiphen
@ckiphen Works for me. Inserts a little personal interaction, which makes it more real.
I may or may not be an enigma
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