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23/02/2021 12:46 pm
She had me at Hello
Verse
I thought I‘d always be single.
In fact I’d made up my mind.
I’d live my life flying solo.
That love was a waste of time.
Pre chorus
One look in her eyes I realized
I was in for a ride.
Emotion collided with logic
The moment she said hi.
Chorus
Lo and behold, lo and behold
She had me at hello.
Verse
One smile and music was playing.
I knew I was good as done.
I’d found myself a copilot.
So ended my solo run.
Pre chorus
One look in her eyes I realized
I was in for a ride.
Emotion collided with logic
The moment she said hi.
Chorus
Lo and behold, lo and behold
She had me at hello.
Bridge
These days I have a copilot
No more flying alone.
No more, no more flying solo.
Verse
I thought I‘d always be single.
In fact I’d made up my mind.
I’d live my life flying solo.
That love was a waste of time.
Pre chorus
One look in her eyes I realized
I was in for a ride.
Emotion collided with logic
The moment she said hi.
Chorus
Lo and behold, lo and behold
She had me at hello.
carroll kiphen
24/02/2021 10:59 am
Hello Carroll, Nice write, just a thought, to make this lyric more personable, instead of "she", replace " she" with you and your. Good luck and best wishes,
Speak soon
This post was modified 4 years ago by Deacon
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Topic starter
24/02/2021 11:08 am
Yep should've thought of that. Easy fix.
carroll kiphen
26/02/2021 5:10 pm
Verse
I thought I‘d forever be single.
In fact I’d made up my mind.
I’d live my life flying solo.
That love was a waste of time.
Pre chorus
One look in your eyes I realized
I was in for a ride.
Then feelings took over I lost composure
The moment you said hi.
oh you had me from the get go
what was I to do
now there's more than 1 echo
all because of you
or
oh you had me from the get go
what was I to do
now I'm one lucky fellow
all because of you
This post was modified 4 years ago by AllfortheLord
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Topic starter
26/02/2021 6:29 pm
Thanx food for thought
carroll kiphen
28/02/2021 4:54 am
Hi Carroll,
if you don't mind, I'd like to give this one a try. Could you try to give me a better bridge that consists of 4 lines. The current 3-line bridge repeats a lot of words you already used in the verse lines. Thanks!
All the best
Robert
Topic starter
28/02/2021 8:45 am
Sure Rob. I'll be on the road this morning but I'll see this afternoon.
carroll kiphen
07/03/2021 5:49 am
Hi Carroll,
here's a first draft of how I "heard" your lyric. Let me know what you think. Suggestions, ideas, critique are always welcome.
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14209967
YOU HAD ME AT HELLO
Verse
I thought I’d always be single
In fact I’d made up my mind
I’d live my life flying solo
'Cause love was a waste of time
Pre chorus
One look in your eyes I realized
I was in for a ride
Emotion clashed with logic
The moment you said hi
Chorus
Lo and behold
You had me at hello
Lo and behold
You had me at hello
Verse
One smile and music was playing
I knew I was good as done
I’d found myself a copilot
To end my solo run
Pre chorus
Chorus
Bridge
No more lonely, no more sad
No more empty home
No more love em and leave em
Since you said hello
Topic starter
07/03/2021 9:49 am
Rob didn't even see your suggestion and the only small changes were Ron's suggestions. Please explain why you feel you need to be credited as a co write.
carroll kiphen
07/03/2021 12:59 pm
Rob didn't even see your suggestion and the only small changes were Ron's suggestions. Please explain why you feel you need to be credited as a co write.
my mistake good luck
Topic starter
07/03/2021 1:27 pm
Ok no hard feelings. I'm fine with Co writes where both contribute significantly.
carroll kiphen
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