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She amazes me


ckiphen
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She amazes me

verse

She's San Francisco soulful.

She dances with girls.

swears salvation is in love.

wants peace for the world.

pre chorus

looks to the west, sees the sun.

set the sky on fire.

while angels sing in heaven

and we walk high wires.

chorus

she’s California crazy

She amazes me.

verse

She is California crazy.

She worships the sun.

wears daffodils in her hair.

She lives to have fun.

pre chorus

plays in the surf, rides the waves.

prays for peace on earth.

she wouldn’t hurt anyone.

never thinks the worst.

chorus

She’s California crazy

She amazes me.

bridge

with childlike innocence

her positive attitude.

I can’t help but love her

What else, what else can I do?

verse

She's San Francisco soulful.

She dances with girls.

swears salvation is in love.

wants peace for the world.

pre chorus

looks to the west, sees the sun.

set the sky on fire.

while angels sing in heaven

and we walk high wires.

chorus

she’s California crazy

She amazes me.

 

carroll kiphen


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Robbi
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Joined: 4 years ago
Posts: 79
 

I like this one. I'd change the title from "She Amazes Me" to "California Crazy". That would catch my attention much more. It could sound something like this:
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14531576

This is a bit different than what I usually record. Very inspiring lyric. Thanks for posting it.

All the best
Robert


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