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03/02/2020 5:36 pm
When the rain begins
Verse
I know you feel unwanted.
You think nobody cares.
You think that god is heartless
And life don’t treat you fair.
Pre chorus
I get it; I’ve been there.
Down that rabbit hole.
I lived thru the winter.
Yet I’m still alone.
Chorus
I’ve hardened my heart.
Developed thick skin
But I need someone
When the rain begins.
Verse
I know you feel defeated
But there’s somebody here.
Who needs you to be fearless.
To do what they won’t dare.
Pre chorus
I get it; I’ve been you.
Out in the pouring rain.
I’ve lived thru the tempest
And you’ll do the same.
Chorus
You’ll harden your heart.
Developed thick skin.
Have faith in yourself
When the storms begin.
Bridge
Life is full of stormy weather
But there are some sunny days.
If we can help one another.
We’ll go walk in the rain.
carroll kiphen
YrralMallik liked
04/02/2020 2:40 pm
Hello Carroll,
Nice write, I might have a few suggestions if you are interested. Good luck and best wishes,
Speak soon
Music is an international language, say it with a song. deaconmusic4u@gmail.com
Topic starter
04/02/2020 3:03 pm
I'm listening. I'm all for improving the write.
carroll kiphen
04/02/2020 7:51 pm
Just a few slight changes,
first pre chorus, line 3 "I've lived through the winter"
second chorus, line 2 "Develop thicker skin"
bridge
Life's full of stormy weather,
there are some sunny day's.
If we help each other,
we'll both walk in the rain.
Hope this helps a little. Good luck and best wishes,
Speak soon
Music is an international language, say it with a song. deaconmusic4u@gmail.com
Topic starter
04/02/2020 8:39 pm
Thanks I'll change it tomorrow.
carroll kiphen
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