Hello "T" great lyric, the re write is much better.  Love your style, always have - always will, good driving melody.  Thank you for sharing, good luck with this and best wishes,

Speak soon

I had no idea how I was going to do this when I wrote it... Turns out, Gavin was right. Once I actually started singing it, "impatience" just sorta rolled off the tongue... Thanx Guys! ? 

Ya know Gav has a way of deep reading lyrics and spotting potential flaws.  I'm kinda glad he is around to keep us straight. "Go Gav", great job to the both of you.  Best wishes,

Speak soon

Posted by: @japov

I had no idea how I was going to do this when I wrote it... Turns out, Gavin was right. Once I actually started singing it, "impatience" just sorta rolled off the tongue... Thanx Guys!  

Even a blind squirrel finds an acorn once in a while 🙂

Deacon - please don't give me the job of keeping you lot straight LOL!

That'd be a full time gig!