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ckiphen
(@ckiphen)
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The Taste/ Loserville

Verse

There’s a place they call Loserville

Where the broken hearted go.

I’ve passed thru there a time or two.

Saw a few people I know.

I saw Envy I saw Hatred

Sitting on their barroom stools.

Drinking from a glass of Pity.

Calling the rest of us fools.

Pre chorus

I told them so long see you later

But I knew it was a lie.

I could see myself in their mirror.

Knew that their fate was mine.

Chorus

I’ve poured Pity from that same bottle.

I’ve quit but I miss the taste.

Was bitter but brought me solace.

In a world that I can’t face.

I’ve poured Pity from that same bottle.

I’ve quit but I miss the taste.

Verse

There’s a place they call Loserville

Where the lonely people go.

I pass thru there from time to time

When I’m feeling kinda low.

I see heartbreak I see sorrow

Drinking with their buddy Blue.

Complaining that life’s unfair

Knowing the opposites true.

Pre chorus

I told them so long see you later

But I knew it was a lie.

I could see myself in their mirror.

Knew that their fate was mine.

Chorus

I’ve poured Pity from that same bottle.

I’ve quit but I miss the taste.

Was bitter but brought me solace.

In a world that I can’t face.

I’ve poured Pity from that same bottle.

I’ve quit but I miss the taste.

Bridge

Pity’s a bottomless well.

Heart break a thirsty soul.

Liquor’s a home for losers

Who have no place to go.

Tag

I’ve poured Pity from that same bottle.

I’ve quit but I miss the taste.

 

 

 

 

 

 

carroll kiphen


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Deacon
(@deacon)
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Joined: 7 years ago
Posts: 284
 

Hello Carroll,

Nice write, good structure, great rhyme, might be too sad for todays market, but still is a nice write, Thank you for sharing.  Good luck and best wishes,

Speak soon

Music is an international language, say it with a song. deaconmusic4u@gmail.com


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