Tony, I think there's too much reverb. The echo drowns out the words a bit, especially in the verses.

Here’s what I’ve done with "Raised on Music" ? 

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=13946004

Posted by: @gavin

Tony, I think there's too much reverb. The echo drowns out the words a bit, especially in the verses.

Actually... Lol... RF overdubs his vox so much that can’t be helped. There’s 7 tracks of vocals in his original mix. In "Raised on Music" I went ahead and deleted all but three... ? 

Posted by: @rhysfraser

@japov

Looks like you can’t open GarageBand mac files on iOS. Stupid iPhone. I think I might be able to take your full song and mix it back in as one track. I’ll give that a go. Thanks again dude!

Let me know if there’s anything I can do man, this has been fun. I'll tell you one important thing though... In both of your files you were using the same "master pre-set", you need to turn that OFF when recording your initial tracks! The first thing I did with both of these songs is turn off the master pre-set and noticed that all your track gains were way too high. Balance out your tracks individually first, THEN master them! ? 

Yes, the reverb is too much here!!! I am sure Japov will help you with the sound. I think your song deserves to rebalance the mix. I like the story you tell