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THE DEVIL WANTS HIS DUE


ckiphen
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Feel free to put your own spin on this Tony.

 

THE DEVIL WANTS HIS DUE

VERSE

I’M LOW ON AMMUNTION

I’M LOSING MY AMBITION.

MY FAITH IN MY RELIGION.

MY DREAMS FIND NO FRUITION.

YET I FEEL NO CONTRITION.

 A SERIOUS CONDITION.

PRE CHORUS

I’M ANTICIPATING CONDEMNATION.

CONTEMPLATING WHATS AWAITING

THE DAY I SEE SATAN.

CHORUS

I FED THE FIRE OF MY DESIRE.

NOW THE DEVIL WANTS HIS DUE.

I SOLD HIM MY SOUL FOR FOOL’S GOLD.

NOW THE DEVIL WANTS HIS DUE.

VERSE

MY MIND IS CONVOLUTED

MY SOUL FEELS IT’S EXCLUDED.

POLLUTED AND DELUDED.

I’M SHAKEN I’M FORSAKEN.

I’M AT THE POINT OF BREAKING.

I WISH I WOULD AWAKEN.

PRE CHORUS

 I’M ANTICIPATING CONDEMNATION.

CONTEMPLATING WHATS AWAITING

THE DAY I SEE SATAN.

CHORUS

I FED THE FIRE OF MY DESIRE.

NOW THE DEVIL WANTS HIS DUE.

I SOLD HIM MY SOUL FOR FOOL’S GOLD.

NOW THE DEVIL WANTS HIS DUE.

BRIDGE

I SUCCUMED TO AVARICE

I WAS SEDUCED BY SIN.

SATAN OPENED THE DOOR

AND EVIL SLITHERED IN.

CHORUS

I FED THE FIRE OF MY DESIRE.

NOW THE DEVIL WANTS HIS DUE.

I SOLD HIM MY SOUL FOR FOOL’S GOLD.

NOW THE DEVIL WANTS HIS DUE.

carroll kiphen


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Gavin
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Well written, as always, Carroll. For me the hookiest line is "The day I see Satan," because it's such a striking line and I can imagine the song slowing down to emphasize it at the end of the pre-chorus. And yes, I can imagine Tony doing this one 🙂

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ckiphen
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Figured ID change it up a write something Ala japov

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JAPOV
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"GASP!" All for me? 

OK, I'll do it just to keep my chops up lol... and because I need more practice with BIAB. Get me started CK... a rhythm/tempo, sounds like... Ideas ya'll, orchestrate and motivate me 🙂

 

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ckiphen
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Man ya got me there. In having a hard time putting a tune to this.

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Jenny Stokes
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Hey guys. How u doing?

So what's happening with this peach of a lyric? Has anyone done anything to it yet?

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JAPOV
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Not really lol, have at it! 🙂

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AllfortheLord
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I traded off all the good I had for some fame and fortune
now no matter what or where I go , the devil keeps on watchin  ,
sometimes I wish I could delete and  undo but the devil wants his due

 

 

 


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